[ad_1]
If this was my paper, what would I change about the hook and why?If this was my paper, would I make the claim clearer and why?If this was my paper, would I provide any more definitions or context in the introduction, and why?If this was my paper, would I revise any of my transitions in the body paragraph, and why?If this was my paper, would I expand my conclusion and why?
[ad_2]
Peer Review